The plot had potential but there are so many things going on it made it tough to read, i had to keep putting it down because it was frustrating me so much, I’d think we were rounding something off and then POW something else is added to the mix. They never stepped in and acted as genuine parents, almost rendering their inclusion in the story unnecessary. Kayla's character was particularly inconsistent, appearing and disappearing without any logical explanation.

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A secret adopted brother that almost nobody knew about showing up at the last minute and surprising everyone, making up with all of them, and coincidentally being a part of the same MC that the hookup and Josh are part of?The college student is still immature, but they'recloser to being on their own and living an adult life and it shows in the choices that are legitimately available to them.

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I just felt like Sofia was always trying to be that girl that is always going to say I’m just a nobody you don’t need me.

She thought everything was going great — till he dumped her, on her birthday — in front of all her family and friends and on top of that was cheating on her with her best friend Kayla.

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Goes from introvert loner to wanting to be a stripper who also gives the H random confident strip teases…even though she has money and really doesn’t need a job🧐🤦🏻‍♀️ WTF is happening right now? It felt at times like this book was written by chat gpt or one of those pay per chapter, English as a second language apps. It will change Jena, whose first brush with romance takes her that much closer to having a life, and not just reading about those infinitely cooler and more exciting. The plot could have worked really well, it just felt like it was a lot of “telling” rather than “showing”. They spend so much time on this plot line and how he didn’t want to break up with her over and over again.Bax felt like an unnecessary character and he was very clingy when all they were supposed to be were f- buddies. Sophia never saw herself falling in love and she certainly didn’t see herself falling in love with the golden boy at her high school. Throwing in random plot twist doesn’t make a book better unless it actually fits with the story and is added to make the book better.